Poetry...

18 of feb..the day to hand in my poetry final assignment and my teacher Mr. Gregory asked us to read our poem to the whole class..i was so nervous that people say i am rapping but not poetry reading..lol..anyway..i learned quite a lot of thing in this unit..thnx to my teacher..

i used to be a person who is afraid of poetry..but now it seems quite fun..lol..and if u really look into thing deeply, your mind sometimes will give you thoughts that you never have before..you will look at things many way..sounds like an experts huh??hehehehehe..but that fact is true..i tried it when i was writing my poem..i got stucked and was out of inspirations and ideas..so whenever i see a thing..i will try to see if it fits into my poetry..lol..so desperate it sound..hahahaha...

anyway..these are the poem i made..give some some comment pls if u are ever goin to read these..thnx..

1) Free Verse:
Life is like a story,
Filled with misery and mystery;
The future, unpredictable,
Tried to be optimistic but still a pessimistic,
Many have failed to survive the depression.

Life is nothing but a play,
To succeed, learn to act;
Hide your emotions and feelings,
Let people have what they want;
And they will grant you your desires,
Oppose them and face your doom.

Every road has an end;
When the stage is closing,
We will all be rotten and forgotten,
Turning into nothingness and be gone.

So I am running,
Trying to get out of my life,
Breaking out the tradition and way of life;
But it seems impossible, unachievable,




2) Hatred (Couplet)
Give me a knife,
And I would immediately take a person’s life.

Give me my voice,
And I would shout into the air filled with moist.

Give me emotions and feelings,
And I would show you my hatred for things.

With lovely anger and revulsion,
Rational is nothing as I only have detestation.

With hatred and loathing,
I am daring to do anything yearning.

Hatred, detestation, revulsion,
Wrecking lives into a worthless conclusion.



3) My Love (Quatrain)
When bright sunlight shone upon your evil-like beauty face,
That was the first time I saw an angel which made me daze;
Your deep blue eyes froze me,
Like a child stunned by his favorite candy.

When the light breeze blew against your hair,
I smelled a sweet fragrance in the air;
You made the difference in my life,
Like a blind man suddenly sees light in his life.

When you are in danger,
I am undergoing pain which never tender,
Like an ant being put into an oven,
Afraid I might not be able to save you from being threaten.

When you enter the room,
You drive me nuts, making me crazy like being doom;
All I want is to love you this instance.
But do you even notice my presence?